It All Begins with the First Draft… #SatisfactionSaturday (@KaceyHammell)

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Kacey here, and good morning all. Happy September! Can you believe how fast this year has gone by already?? It’s crazy. It’s like blink and the day is over. Kids are back to school (here in my area) this coming Tuesday. I’m back and forth with the feelings however. I love having my kids’ home all the time. I’ve never been one to be excited to see them leave every morning, but I do enjoy watching them experience new things and grow up to be young and interesting people.

But that’s not really what I am here to discuss. I promise. No Mommy woes any further. Today, I want to share about when writing that “never ending” story. There are times, like with my current WIP that seem to go on forever. It doesn’t happen often but when it does, it can be overwhelming and / or concerning (for some). Outlining stories on paper is a great idea. I know many authors who use chapter boards, post-it notes of a variety of colors and pages and pages of outlines. (Psst: John Grisham usually does about 50 pages of outlines, following them to the letter). Whenever I do an outline it is a brief one about that of course has the conflicts, beginning, middle, end as I see it at the time. But my twists and turns for a story don’t usually come to me until I’m actually writing the story, and sometimes things in my outline change. Surprises can be great, makes things so exciting, but sometimes it can be a downfall for some authors.

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And cause the author to have one of those “will this frickin’ book ever end!!??” shrieks that can be heard from one end of the house to the other. I’m in that now with my WIP but I’m still happy that the story is being written. Things are more complex than I thought, and what I am writing is key to the story. My writing motto is usually – don’t stifle the writing. Write until the story is done and don’t hold back – and I am still following that but I did think I’d be done this already!! LOL Just a double-edged sword really. We writers are slaves to the words. *g*

The best thing for any author to do is sit in that chair, have the tea/coffee pot beside you and write that first draft as if there are no limitations, no one you have to answer to in that stage of things, and enjoy it. Once that first draft is done however, the real work (in my mind) begins. Self-edits. The slashing and slaying of the overused words, the run-on sentences, the time to fix the moments where your leading lady has red hair in one scene and blonde everywhere else, to make your hero smoothly transition from an A-hole to a sweetheart, and push the limits of every plot/twist.

I personally love the self-edit stage the best. That’s when I can start reading my story again – I DO NOT make any revisions to any of the first draft until it’s done. Many will write each chapter then edit as they write it – it doesn’t work for me – I enjoy going back and reading/editing my story after the first draft is done, I get those “Oh wow, did I write this? It’s so good.”  And of course there are the “Oh wow, you idiot, this just won’t do”. Self-edits are important for all authors. You want the very best piece of creativity to be sent to the publishers. I mean, why put in all that effort writing a story when you aren’t going to care for it, do each step (from self-edits to critique partners, to beta/alpha readers, etc. – your routine is YOURS so do it how it works best for you), and watch your story grow with every level of molding you put it through to not make it the very best to publish. All of us on this blog have said it – Edits / finding the right editor is VERY important. No book should be published without proper editing.

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A key piece to remember when you’re done the first draft of your stories is the most important for me – is the story always moving forward? Concentrate first on the plot/main point of conflict. During the editing process, it’s easy to get caught up in the misspelled words, etc., but my first read through is always concentrating heavily on the plot aspects. From main conflict to secondary and even tertiary plots. In the outline these three areas are the most important. I start every outline with each one. always ensure that every scene keeps things moving along quickly. Readers like the details and such, but they don’t like to be weighed down by too much that is unnecessary.

After I have diligently done all the slashing and fixes, especially if I’m uncertain the story is moving along well enough and I’m not weighing anything down but I might be too close to the story to still see the issues, I will bring in my critique partners and a beta reader. Authors are very close to ever story they write and sometimes need unbiased individual who are blunt in their feedback and will tell me us like it is. Some authors don’t need these people, and that is fine, but for me personally I can’t stress enough how useful CPs & beta readers are for me. They give me a piece of mind that I have covered all my bases to make an even better story than I first though. Besides, who better to discuss/brainstorm about a story with than other like-minded people who know what it takes to do this job.

All in all, every author has their own writing process but it all begins with that first draft. Nothing else can happen until the story is written. So sit, get the fingers flying over the keyboard and keep going until the story/characters say it is done. In most cases the first draft is not always the finished product and that is the first acceptance an author has to make. It’s a long, sometimes grueling, but amazing journey from start to finish.

 

Good luck! Happy writing!!

Kacey (2)

 

6 thoughts on “It All Begins with the First Draft… #SatisfactionSaturday (@KaceyHammell)

  1. Fab post, Kacey. Did you hear me scream YES! lol. This is so me right now, writing the never ending story. Only in my case it’s due to me picking it up and putting it down again. It’s driving me slowly round the bend, this one. It was supposed to be a fun short and has turned into a very complex and emotional story that is taking a lot out of me hence the pick up, put down routine.
    *smiles wryly*
    Anyhoo, this isn’t about my woes, but your post so resonated with me right now 🙂 We follow a pretty similar routine with the exception that I never outline. NO point at all whatsover, in my case, because those darn characters never do as they’re told. 🙂

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    • I guess I should have stated … only about 40% of my outline stays with the final draft of every story. I do an outline to get all the ideas/plots out of my head, especially if I’m working on a different WIP, but rarely does everything make it to final cut because, like you said, characters never ever behave. We are just their sheep, they lead us around — sometimes on a merry chase.
      I am at the “i don’t know if i like this” part of the process with WIP that is almost done. Of course last week i said i had about 10K left to write, I’ve written 7k and I think ANOTHER 10k will happen. Sigh. I’m just the sheep.LOL

      Can’t wait to read your next story, Doris!

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  2. Thank you for sharing your process! I loved this. Me, I’m one of those really weird people who starts at the beginning and writes till the end and then edits myself after I’ve stepped away from the book for a couple of days or so. ❤

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